Marriage is a beautiful thing.
When you finally go out and buy a ring.
Your life will be changed forever.
You got to keep it hot like a sweater,
And hold her tight and pet her
But keep it cool like ice cubes.
It can be difficult like rubix cubes.
When I was just a boy I use to say.
I wonder what it will be like on my wedding day?
It will be a day to remember and cherish.
I don't want the relationship to parish.
:)
I still can't believe you used 'sweater', but at least it all rhymed...
ReplyDeletealso: 'parish' is actually 'perish'
Anyway, you had some good points in here and the best lines were: "When I was just a boy I use(d) to say/I wonder what it will be like on my wedding day?"
So...good job, Eric.
hahaha eric im really feelin this poem. there are some good points in this poem like it can be difficult and it will change your life
ReplyDeleteEric way to keep the rhymes goin i like your style and my favorite line is its difficult like rubix cubes because there are so many people in the world and when you get married you are showing that person is for you and i think thats very difficult.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhymes you kept going. My favorite was the rubix cubes part. I think that you should have talked more about what you think your wedding would be like. But otherwise it was good.
ReplyDeleteEric, I like this. Your ryhmes are very nice. :)
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